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#1 Пользователь офлайн   Vaz 

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Отправлено 29 May 2006 - 00:23

here is a new track i am working on , far from finished
comments on it would be wery much appriciated
does it sound well on your system.. etc.
any advice?

http://trancecentral.sytes.net/-d/

thanks in advance :)

Сообщение отредактировал Vaz: 03 June 2006 - 17:26

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Отправлено 29 May 2006 - 02:10

Well...
Nice track, smooth and pleasant to listen to. I've found two weak points:
First, concerning sound - the drums seem to be too articulated and clearly heard. Maybe you should try to apply a soft compressor or a little reverb?
The second trouble - I can't catch the main theme. There are several nice-sounding synths, but it seems like you haven't decided yet which one to be the main. You'd better launch the main theme just after the pads, cause it gives some real drive even if the track is deep-styled. E.g., if we take a glance at "Helsinki Scorchin'", for instance, we'll see that the combination of the powerful pad(sidechain compressed by kick) and chopped vocals is considered to be the main theme, which has the most drive.

Wanna know my opinion 'bout all the stuff? My opinion is only my imho, actually. Don't consider it to be important. If you feel, that it should be only this way and no other - just go on! Too many contradicting opinions can't show the right way... And only innovative style can become something of a great interest. So, don't consider my notices to be a point to argue.

ps: God damn, I haven't written anything in English for ages and it seems like I'm slowly loosing this pretty skill...

Сообщение отредактировал resistor: 29 May 2006 - 02:14


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Отправлено 29 May 2006 - 02:18

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The second trouble - I can't catch the main theme. There are several nice-sounding synths, but it seems like you haven't decided yet which one to be the main.
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thats true i really havent decided .. but i am going to make a lead that will be with the strings after the pads finish and i am working on that and yes about the sound, this is just a quick compile so the sound will be much better when i finalize the track.

thank you for your comment, really appricated :)
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Отправлено 29 May 2006 - 06:29

Vaz (29.05.2006 - 06:18) писал:

thank you for your comment, really appricated :icq3:
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You're always welcome :)

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Отправлено 30 May 2006 - 02:35

made a new melody and i think im gonna use it .
how u like it?

http://trancecentral.sytes.net/-d/

in progress Updated: (30.5)

Сообщение отредактировал Vaz: 30 May 2006 - 23:49

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Отправлено 30 May 2006 - 14:41

"Vaz" - is this your name? :)

simply interesting :lol:
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Отправлено 30 May 2006 - 20:35

no it is just a nickname i have used for many years
one of my fav synths is called VAZ and then there is also a car factory with that name,
they make or made the lada cars there was once alot af lada in iceland.
wery funny looking cars :cry2: but damn did they last..
My real name is Guðni Steinar Sigurðsson :drinks:
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Отправлено 30 May 2006 - 20:39

Vaz (30.05.2006 - 21:35) писал:

no it is just a nickname i have used for many years
one of my fav synths is called VAZ and then there is also a car factory with that name,
they make or made the lada cars there was once alot af lada in iceland.
wery funny looking cars :drinks: but damn did they last..
My real name is Guðni Steinar Sigurðsson :D
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Ohh:)
Difficult name)
Great to meet you...
Sorry,but i dont know english well,but its very interesting for me to chating with you... :cry2:

Your new track is awesome COOL,great work,but not unfibished,is it?:icq3:
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Отправлено 30 May 2006 - 20:59

Nice to meet u 2 :cry2:
no the track is far from finished but i hope i will finalize it within 2 weeks from now
there is still alot of work ahead.
and the tempo will also be slower , about 129 - 130 bpm.
thanks man im really glad u like it.
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Отправлено 30 May 2006 - 21:07

Aha, very interesting! Let me resist the wish to download it immediately and wait until you're done with it. I just don't want to look like I comment on every step you make. :cry2: As soon as you finish, I'll be glad to listen to it.

Сообщение отредактировал resistor: 30 May 2006 - 22:12


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Отправлено 30 May 2006 - 21:13

Vaz (31.05.2006 - 00:35) писал:

...there is also a car factory with that name,
they make or made the lada cars there was once alot af lada in iceland.
wery funny looking cars :D but damn did they last..
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:drinks: :cry2:

These cars are from Russia! :icq3:
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Отправлено 30 May 2006 - 21:52

yup i know
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